http://ivywatcher.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ivywatcher.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tellytubby101 2011-03-30 08:20 pm (UTC)

This was lovely; I read it twice before I commented just to appreciate it, so thank you. You provide great backstory, which is always fantastic to read, but more importantly I think you really captured the voice of Grave's Lestrade, even without much dialogue. There's a lot of facets to that character, and we don't see many of them on the show, but you pegged some quiet subtleties here--the way he doesn't correct his teacher, but snaps out that "don't commit suicide" line, and then finds his deepest identity in his son--that make it feel like parts of the character that I recognize. You make him a whole person here (and not an entirely happy one), which is just how it should be. Well done. :)

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