One is a good length. It's just enough to make you want more and not too long to make you go bwah? Someone needs to draw a rebel leader Dr Hatake, maybe waving an Icha Icha instead of a Hitler style baton.
I love oblivious!Iruka. He's so great. It fits in well with his character profile as "being popular with both men and women". XD Oh, silly boy man.
Reincarnation can be hard to write well, especially since it's such a philosophic topic and it can get confusing following the different lives. It ended on a hopeful note, which is nice. The idea of going on forever, stuck in a terrible cycle, kind of breaks my mind a little. Just a little *cause it's already broken*.
Six is where my comment fail occurred haha, but you actually filled that prompt quite nicely since viewing the body of a loved one as a kind of god is basically what it's about. Khalil Gibran... a quintessential Classic Arabic poet. A lot of people are attracted to things like scars anyway
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I love oblivious!Iruka. He's so great. It fits in well with his character profile as "being popular with both men and women". XD Oh, silly
boyman.Reincarnation can be hard to write well, especially since it's such a philosophic topic and it can get confusing following the different lives. It ended on a hopeful note, which is nice. The idea of going on forever, stuck in a terrible cycle, kind of breaks my mind a little. Just a little *cause it's already broken*.
Six is where my comment fail occurred haha, but you actually filled that prompt quite nicely since viewing the body of a loved one as a kind of god is basically what it's about. Khalil Gibran... a quintessential Classic Arabic poet. A lot of people are attracted to things like scars anyway