ext_28173 ([identity profile] gryvon.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tellytubby101 2011-08-11 11:31 pm (UTC)

With critiques, mostly I just want something in depth, beyond the usual spelling/grammar corrections. I like to know what worked well and what bombed, what parts feel slow or flat or awkward, where things need expanded or condensed. A critiquer should be looking for plot holes, for inconsistencies, for dropped storylines. I'm more interested in their thoughts on how the story works as a whole than individual line by line corrections (though those are good/necessary too).

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