Hey, great chapter! I love the little lines you put in there in reference to the series- "If Sherlock had been given another year or so..." And some of Sherlock's experiments (bathroom darkrooms) crack me up. The only thing that fazed me in this chapter was the timeline in relation to the show. I like that you don't recopy lines of dialogue from the show, but I'm occasionally confused as to what's happened and what hasn't. For example, it wasn't until Sherlock's thought blurb and graffiti that I realized the whole second episode had passed. Still, I continue to love your characterizations and new world... and I have to admit that a ficlet from Anderson's POV could be hilarious. ;D
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Date: 2011-03-11 04:52 am (UTC)