I saw this fic in erik_charles first thing after I woke up and thought: "this sounds like the prompt I posted a while ago..." and then I saw your link to the kink meme and then I was fairly incoherent after that. I loved your Model!AU and seeing you fill this prompt makes me scream "I'm not worthy!"
My focus in the prompt completely aside: I love this fic. It's dark, heart breaking,suspenseful and Oh my god I'm with everybody here when I say: I want Erik to be alive!
But that's Schrödinger’s Cat for you. You'll never know unless you open the box.
I love the switching perspectives between the characters, you get to see how each of them are feeling at that moment and it adds this hopeless feeling and that just rounds out the desperation Charles is experiencing. Alex's determination to help, Hank's worry and Sean's inability to help accentuates the fact that Charles is slowly coming apart trying to find Erik.
And then Erik. I don't even know where to start...I don't know if I should just sit here numb or hug you for having Erik's voice in Second person POV. The intensity of Erik's emotion just feels somewhat more tangible.
I'm going to stop now, because if I don't I might end up writing something terribly long.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
OP de-anoning now too....I am very humbled
Date: 2011-07-19 05:10 pm (UTC)My focus in the prompt completely aside: I love this fic. It's dark, heart breaking,suspenseful and Oh my god I'm with everybody here when I say: I want Erik to be alive!
But that's Schrödinger’s Cat for you. You'll never know unless you open the box.
I love the switching perspectives between the characters, you get to see how each of them are feeling at that moment and it adds this hopeless feeling and that just rounds out the desperation Charles is experiencing. Alex's determination to help, Hank's worry and Sean's inability to help accentuates the fact that Charles is slowly coming apart trying to find Erik.
And then Erik. I don't even know where to start...I don't know if I should just sit here numb or hug you for having Erik's voice in Second person POV. The intensity of Erik's emotion just feels somewhat more tangible.
I'm going to stop now, because if I don't I might end up writing something terribly long.