I'll personally go with alive, because I'm just like that, but the fact that the ambiguity exists is just great!
I think you captured everyone's pov just amazingly. For a moment, it made me think about the CSI double episode directed by Tarantino (go watch it if you didn't see it already! Even if you don't like the series, it's great). Your story certainly shares the same feelings and settings... talent, maybe?
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Date: 2011-08-02 12:40 pm (UTC)I'll personally go with alive, because I'm just like that, but the fact that the ambiguity exists is just great!
I think you captured everyone's pov just amazingly. For a moment, it made me think about the CSI double episode directed by Tarantino (go watch it if you didn't see it already! Even if you don't like the series, it's great). Your story certainly shares the same feelings and settings... talent, maybe?